I’m gonna call out this expansion for 2nd ed Kult, a totally incomprehensible, unuseable book called Purgatory. This is my copy from when I was working with Target and got all their goodies.
Believe me, my jaw definitely dropped when I opened this thing up. What the heck are you supposed to do with such an absurd artifact? It’s nearly unreadable.
There was a…fad, phase, something, at The Forge that eschewed all visual representation. I think it was considered distracting to the central work, maybe? That if the work can’t stand on its own then … something. Honestly I never understood the core argument, other than it being a chance for folks to slag D&D sales.
Don’t worry! I’m not gonna relitigate any of that. But I think it’s self-evident that presentation is information. Go too far in one direction — say, my mostly unadorned Word docs I turn in for various ill-considered game design contests — and you can’t get anyone’s attention. Go too far in the other direction — like Purgatory here — and you can’t keep anyone’s attention.
I’m gonna share a little story that will have you rolling your eyes at the obviousness of it all.
So I’ve got maybe a dozen finished-and-lightly-tested little games I’d like to get out into the world, right? Several small-footprint PbtA hacks (Jurassic World, Robot Park, Tiny Dragons), last year’s Game Chef finalist (Dragon, Fly!), others (this year’s Game Chef, Intake, not a finalist but I’m so stoked on it). Once upon a time, I actually did visual design as part of my general marketing practice. But that was nearly 20 years ago now, and I don’t have the software mastery nor the design chops of the actual pros. Anyway, I was lamenting this to Mark Diaz Truman hoping for advice — I think I’d given him a draft of my Secret Unnamed Project but, hey, unadorned Word so ugh. He had the simplest advice: pay a layout artist. His followup was along the lines of “put them up for sale at drivethru and it’ll pay for itself with like a dozen sales.”
Other than the obvious necessity of having the cash on hand for the initial outlay, that answer is so obvious. I think I’m scared off by what I’m imagining the cost will be, but I’m scared because I’m ignorant. It’s something I hope to rectify soon. Obviously it can’t be too much if a few sales will cover the cost.
Anyway: presentation is information. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise.
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Same with two magic books, Judas grail was a bit more readable 😀
The magic books were RIDICULOUS.
John Stavropoulos did me that exact favour when I was stalling about War Birds.
Luke Crane said on one of the podcasts I recorded with him there are specific colors you can use if you’re dropping graphics under the text. If you don’t know the magic numbers then you get something like above. I’m guessing you can’t see how bad it is in a monitor, but I didn’t ask him that question, so supposition on my part.
It’s super bad.
Man there was some game a friend of mine bought 15 years ago that was like this. It had two sections, and you had to flip it upside down and turn it around to access the other section so forget easy referencing, and they shit gear designs all over the page making me squint to read. I get what they were trying to do but eventually it stops being a usable book.
I’ve definitely been paralyzed by imagined costs! We needed a front license plate bracket for our car and it was dealer-only part. I put off dealing with it for months, and it turned out the damn thing cost all of like $5. Live & learn.
Isn’t that the dumbest thing?
Then again I had no idea how much a new A/C would cost until we had to buy one, and it was like $7k.
Yes… and it seems like one finds out about the really expensive problems very quickly.
WILL THAT A/C GET YOUR GAME ON DRIVETHRU NO I DIDN’T THINK SO
Yet there are so many gamers who will tell you blank white space is literally money you are stealing outta their wallets.
Mark Delsing there are gamers who say all kinds of silly things. Like that the system doesn’t matter, or that the GM is a storyteller.
Paul Beakley The GM doesn’t matter!
Given the … mixed response to #indiegameaday last year, starting up a #shitgamerssay thing would probably get my house fire-bombed.
…I’m still really into the prospect of #shitgamerssay, I confess.
I’ll redirect the firebombs to your place then, Andi! 😛
It’s all good until they wreck the hammock.
(I don’t think most gamers would know the origins of the #shitmypeoplesay thing, and there’d have to be some explaining. Oh my god the flame wars on my mountain biking forum when #shitsinglespeederssay hit big.)