Legit don’t have the energy to read all the comments here (sorry!) but 1) if you need an editor, please let me know – I’ve read a ton of your posts and have a pretty good idea of your voice, and 2) do you think you’ll have any sensitivity reads or anything done? Mostly because sometimes when we talk about game mechanics and settings and stuff we can slip on stuff unintentionally and it’s sometimes useful. I’m not saying you have to, but it might be worth considering.